[[ Stole from Artizan. Why? Cause I could. >8D ]]
"Aww you confessed your crime. Shame, it would've been a nice snack too."
[[ I already know Neuro's going to be a mary-sue by the end of this. ]]
"You mean 'marvelous and original'~"--------------------------
[ ] They are possessed by an angel.
[ ] They are possessed by a demon.
[/] They are a werewolf//vampire//fairy. [[ But he's a demon! ]]
[X] They are physically strong.
[X] They have a rare hair//fur color [[ Nobody is born with three different hair colors, especially not purple/black and green ]]
[X] Their eyes are an unusual colour. [[ They're like different shades of green all around; no shine whatsoever on them either ]]
[ ] This eye colour happens to be red.
[X] Their eyes change colour. [[ When he puts on his human facade, they go from green to basically teal ]]
[/] They have wings. [[ Technically.....but you only see them like once! And then I just abuse that fact ]]
[X] They can grow extra body parts//shape shift. [[ Neuro's tools can alter his shape like turn into a giant blade. Also, instant claws and several other pointy shit ]]
[/] They are immortal. [[ Almost....almost. If you asked he'd say yes probably but he's not ]]
[/] [If female.] They have large boobs. [[ In Neuro's vision of what he'd look like if he was a girl, yeah he's got boobs ]]
[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. [[ Nobody pays him ANY mind which is strange cause UMPH that body ]]
[/] They are telekinetic//pyrokinetic//etc. [[ He's set a newspaper on fire without any other means so....I guess? ]]
[X] They have sixth sense//can mind-read//etc. [[ He can detect if there's a mystery around or surrounding an object linked to it ]]
[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. [[ His batteries in his hair contain power if he ever need to fuel up ]]
[ ] They have a special ability//power, but they don't know about it yet.
[ ] They were bestowed//cursed with these powers.
[ ] They are a healer.
[ ] They are from a very rich//royal family.
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich//royal background.
[/] They have lost one//both of their parents. [[ Headcanon wise? Yes. Canon wise? We absolutely know SHIT about his background ]]
[ ] They ran away from home. [[ I wish I knew these things *cries* ]]
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one//both of their parent's death.
[X] They are part angel//demon//faerie//some other mythical creature. [[ Demoooooooooooon ]]
[/] They never knew their parents. [[ Pure headcanon.....*sob* ]]
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
[/] They are very attractive to the same gender. [[ Headcanon, yeah >u> ]]
[ ] They have lots of friends//no friends.
[ ] They are emo/cutesy.
[/] They look much younger//older than they really are. [[ IDK? The age section of his bio was just scribbles so you can't tell! ]]
[ ] They are currently in a relationship.
[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
[ ] They have a mental disorder.
[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
[X] They are a psycho. [[ Oh boy....he sure is.... ]]
[/] They have multiple personalities. [[ It's all fake. Nice and naive as a human and sinister and dickish as a demon ]]
[X] They are very intelligent. [[ In the first 12 hours of his stay on Earth, he learned all that a 16 year old school kid learns. Yeah...he's smart ]]
[ ] They have hallucinations.
[ ] They can summon spirits//demons//angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual//unrealistic pet.
[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
[ ] They can talk to spirits//ghosts.
[X] Some part of their body glows. [[ He can make his eyes glow and sometimes summoning a tool will make him glow green too ]]
[X] They have a rare//unusual name. [[ Cause Neuro is a common name, yeah? Also....Nougami means "Brain Eater" Nice name ]]
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. [[ No but Neuro (and Yako) are born on the International Day of Awesomeness ]]
[ ] They have a twin
[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
[/] They are connected with a certain animal. [[ I guess parrot since he's a parrot demon ]]
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime//manga
[ ] They are a race//species that is discriminated against//misunderstood.
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood//feared.
[ ] They live//lived on the streets at some point in their lives.
[ ] They are hiding from someone//something.
[ ] They have a rare blood type.
[ ] They cry blood.
[/] Certain noises//smells//situations//etc. make their powers activate//give them a nervous breakdown. [[ Mysteries man.....woaaaaaah ]]
[X] They are from a different country to where they live, a.k.a 'exotic'. [[ Hell.....no not Hell, Michigan 8T ]]
[X] They are very mysterious//dark.
[X] They are very lively//happy.
[/] Their mood changes a lot//very quickly.
[ ] They are very patient.
[ ] They are from a long line of [[Helljumper's/ODST's]]
[X] They have a piece of jewelry//clothing that they always wear. [[ Always wears that damn awful suit! Oh and his gloves and hair batteries ]]
[ ] They have amnesia.
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
[ ] The have a some sort of un-beneficial curse upon them.
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
[/] They have insomnia. [[ Neuro doesn't have the same sleeping habits as he's a demon so he usually just sleeps 3 hours a day or so ]]
Overall Points : 23 [[ Dear fucking god Neuro ]]
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Point Reduction :: Six
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following
[ ] They smoke.
[ ] They are an alcoholic.
[ ] They are overweight.
[ ] They are addicted to drugs.
[ ] They have a short temper.
[X] They enjoy bullying others.
[ ] They are relatively emotionless.
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Final Score : 17
5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 -Mary-Sue
Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?
[[ DEAR GOD NEURO ]]